We were learning about things we loved in lockdown but are gone now.
I found it easy to think of the things to write down.
I found it hard to do the background.
I really enjoyed making the background.
Next time I need to think of more things to write down.
Hi Zac,Im Larz from Gisborne Intermediate/Gisint,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your poem it really interested me. I like how you addded photos saying hello and goodbye it really made it pop. I also like how you wrote a good amount of writing for your poem and your desrciption of what you did. The one thing I think you could work on would be to Change your writing to a different color because I couldn't really read it that well when it was on the purple and pink cloud. But besides that you don't need to work on anything else.
Great job Zac :D
Thank you for your feedback larz
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